Music Video Rough Cut/Feedback

Here is my rough cut of the music video:

Feedback on the rough cut:

After showing the music video to a small group I gave them a link to a survey on SurveyMonkey in order to get feedback on my music video: Create your own user feedback survey
From the survey answers I found the following:

Pros:

• Good Story
• Unique Effects
• Nice Varied Shots
• Most think the video fitted into the "folk" genre

Cons:

• Needs lip synching
• The scenes with the stock footage needs to be actually shot
• Tighter editing
• More editing 'to the beat'

From these answers I now know that I need to film some more scenes, specifically the lip syncing and the stock footage, and I need to spend more time editing.